Our website makes use of cookies. To find out more please read our privacy policy

Poetry CritiqueInspection

Owen's war poetry has blood as a recurring and ambiguous symbol of sacrifice: of the sacrifice demanded of and offered up by the fighting soldier and also of Christ's sacrifice for man's redemption.

Blood, sacrifice, guilt are at the heart of INSPECTION.

Owen wrote it in August/September 1917 at Craiglockhart and later listed it under "inhumanity in War". Sassoon's influence is strong (read the latter's STAND-TO, GOOD FRIDAY MORNING). The diction is largely colloquial, the tone matter-of-fact and tinged with bitterness. It assumes an analogy between a military parade and the Last Judgement and between the Army High Command and God.

INSPECTION has a cast of three - officer, sergeant and presumably, private soldier. Stanza 1 in which the men are on parade, is characterised by formal, stylised dialogue between all three, stanza 2 an informal conversation between officer and private, while stanza 3 comprises an apologia or short homily by the man who has been punished for having a dirty uniform. As the poem moves forward, the officer experiences a diminution of status from, first, being in command to, second, conversing on more or less equal terms to, finally, being given a sharp lesson. Meanwhile, the soldier, after being at the receiving end, finishes up firmly in charge.

A heavy beat at the start of line 1 promises drama to come. Then from line 5 the tension abates leading to a more reflective tone in the third stanza. The onomatopoeic "rapped" and "snapped" add to the initial feeling of menace. Fairly constant rhyme and rhythm aid the poem's mostly conversational style.

The MACBETH reference ("damned spot") in stanza 2 is charged with irony. In Lady Macbeth's case the blood is dirt, the dirt of guilt; in the soldier's case it clearly isn't, though the officer doesn't realise this and his naïve remark prepares the way for his instruction to come.

Stanza 3 reveals the soldier as the poem's truth-teller. He looks "far off" to where he was wounded, and is far-seeing too in being able to grasp what Owen later describes in STRANGE MEETING as "truths that lie too deep for taint". "The world is washing out its stains," he says, believing of course that it's doing nothing of the kind. Material stains, these may be erased easily enough; but as Lady Macbeth finds, the stains of guilt cannot be disposed of by physical means.

The soldier's laugh is hollow, his stance cynical, although the full extent of his cynicism may not be as clear as it seems. The army is his immediate target for all its preoccupation with the superficial, but the army is the world in microcosm, a world that has not even begun to wash out its figurative stains, a world only faintly aware, if aware at all, of what the expiation of guilt entails.

But when we're duly whitewashed, being dead,

The race will bear Field Marshal God's inspection.

Who or what is being satirised here in these final, stunning lines? Certainly the army, a clear target for its inappropriate practices, and warmongers, militant clergy and so on whose call for others to be sacrificed and therefore "whitewashed" carries its own stain.

But Field Marshal God? There's scorn in that, also some sadness. An army commander who thinks he's God and a God turned army commander all in one. If they're indistinguishable where do we find God on His own and blood's sacramental significance? Who now will take out stains that matter?

Sometimes Owen stands back from his subject, as in SPRING OFFENSIVE. In INSPECTION he places himself at the centre of the action. He can be recognised as the officer in stanza 1, conscious of his rank and of the importance of maintaining discipline. We see him also in the second stanza, perhaps slightly unhappy on reflection about the man's punishment and seeking him out for a quiet chat, man to man.

But whose is the viewpoint in stanza 3? The young soldier's yes, who had been treated unfairly, a young man of evident education and a philosophical bent.

What charge is he making? That those who run the show have got it badly wrong. It's a serious charge and because he's been harshly dealt with he feels strongly about it. However, if we assume that Owen himself is sharing the truth-teller's role, then Owen's angle will be a little different.

For Owen is part of the system that is being called to account, a part of that world that needs to wash out its stains, a party to the guilt and conscious of the fact. Unlikely that once flung into the maelstrom of war he would have retained his faith intact, yet I do believe that he was still able to hold on to certain truths which God's church on earth (Field Marshal God as he accused the Church of seeing Him) appeared largely to have forgotten.

INSPECTION leaves both private soldier and officer in rueful mood. It may have left its poet with more cause for ruefulness than either.

Copyright Kenneth Simcox, 2000

Back to top